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Post by heartache2893 on Aug 7, 2008 17:44:30 GMT -5
Walking through the lonely woods No clearings No openings Wandering blind
Branches hitting Blood dripping Pain searing Fear sets in
Wandering alone Searching for something Finding nothing Walking threw the endless woods
Light up ahead Shining threw the branches Salvation only inches away Running for salvation
I reach the light It dissapears My hope is lost Crying for my freedom
Blood drips Pain sears Fear sets in I am alone Lost forever in these Lonely woods
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Post by Violet Twlilight on Aug 8, 2008 12:10:30 GMT -5
That's chilling dear.
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Post by Lucy on Aug 8, 2008 18:13:30 GMT -5
These are very dark. Do they reflect the way you feel most of the time or are they creations that don't have much to do with you personally? I feel bad if these are reflections of your most common emotions.
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Post by heartache2893 on Aug 9, 2008 0:08:13 GMT -5
All of my poems are written about how I am feeling at the time. I think when I wrote this one it was after a horrible break up with my ex of 6 years. Most of my poems have to do with feeling alone . . . I always feel alone . . I dont know why, but I do.
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Post by Lucy on Aug 9, 2008 21:51:42 GMT -5
Hopefully this place will help you feel less alone. I know I call it a second home.
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